The Scream
October 22nd, 2007 by einsteinholley
I just want to holler
What can I announce
I define my fellings by yelling
suprised, scared, or sad what ever mood
I just fell like screaming even when im around people
People glare at me and wtness that i am different
I just giggle hehehehe and appear suprised (GASP)
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on October 22nd, 2007 at 1:56 pm
I like how you deep the idea of scream in each sentence. But i do think that you should keep a bit of red into it, like the picture. I suggest that you should throw in a bit of drama, cuz right now its looking like a play with music. But that don’t matta. Keep writing!